thereddeath

Thanks for the feedback! I hear you about the characters needing more depth. I'm planning to revisit the early chapters and add more interactions and inner thoughts to really bring out their personalities. This should make it easier to connect with them. I appreciate you sticking with the story and sharing your thoughts.

Yes

While I don’t know anything about horse king heracles I will say that I already have plans for torrent and how he evolves as Miquellas quirk grows and gets stronger.

No it isn’t one of those while their will be fights where he will struggle or Maby even lose he’s not going to be a mc where his abilities weakness is so strong it makes his abilities useless

Thanks for the review and yes Miquella is straight in this story

It all depends on how much energy he puts in so far his first command it was a suggestion but for the second one it was a command

I mean, those were just a few examples. There are a lot more people who are freakishly tall, like Nighteye who is 6'7" and Endeavor who is 6'5". Both of their heights have nothing to do with their Quirk. You also have to remember that this is a world where one of the biggest heroes has a literal foot of his body, which is all neck, and a dude with a spray bottle for a head. Additionally, I don't know if you have read up to the further chapters, but I have shown that both are naturally stronger than the average person, with Miquella being almost twice as strong and Malenia in her bloomed form being almost 10 times as strong, which would most likely support their growth.

My Hero Academia features numerous characters who are exceptionally tall. All Might stands over seven feet tall, despite not being born with a quirk. Fat Gum is even taller, exceeding 8 feet in height. I also am going by the MHA theory that as quirks evolved over time, the average person's body naturally became more durable and physically resilient. This could explain why many characters in the MHA universe can reach such impressive heights without experiencing the health complications typically associated with extreme heights in our world.

They don't travel at light speed yet, as his quirk involves light-like energy attacks. This allows him to alter the physical properties of his attacks, transforming them from light bullets into swords and even blunt weapons.

The reason he's learning martial arts, even though he has a ranged quirk, is that if someone gets too close, he'd be at a major disadvantage. so he wants to cover all his disadvantages