Anonny_Anonymous

I don’t like this. Does this mean multiple reincarnators/transmigrators will be in this fic?

I would have went with 6 tails. Stronger.

For 9 tails, you forgot the negative emotion sensing.

The MC’s obsession with nudity is really weird He should calm down on his sunbathing. There’s no faster way for a white person to age than excess sun. Sun damage can wreck you. And he should know better. Look at all those sneaky paparazzi photos of celebrities. I know you’ve made him not care about stuff like that, but I don’t find it realistic. Even the most laidback celebrities would have an issue with nudity. Based on his experience of being SA’d he should have more issues with it. Instead of jumping into being a full-on nudist. I find it weird that he was willing to subject his new friends (that were basically strangers) to his nudity and having sex with Rihanna in front of them. He could clearly see that they were uncomfortable and he kept doing it with the reasoning being, “I’m on vacation. Deal with it.” I think it’s creepy to force that on other people. Just keep it classy and keep it behind closed doors!

It’s interesting reading about how Perfect Acting works. It makes sense. Art is subjective. You could get a “perfect” piece of art and someone could prefer an inferior version of it just based on their taste alone.

I don’t like that all the big 3 kids apparently have super strength. What’s the point of being a child of a god of strength or whatever if everyone seems to acquire super strength by default?

Genocide is a war crime. So is targeting civilians. Danzo and the other higher ups are responsible for that.

Oh, and you made sure to have him tap the MC’s memories completely before sending him to the alien telepath with a super brain. Good idea… So now everyone has access to knowledge of canon. At this point, why even have the MC in the story? His relevancy has run its course. Someone else has his knowledge of canon, and now there’s a clone with his DNA running around. The MC is doubly irrelevant.

This is annoying. Transmigrating another character into DC is a mistake and adds nothing to the story. Thanks for the chapter though.