It is peculiar to note that the span of the story, encompassing over 100 chapters, is condensed within a mere 10 days. The progression of events, such as the initial meeting followed by a proposal and subsequent cohabitation with twin children, appears to be hasty and unrealistic. Furthermore, the development of the romantic relationship between the characters is rushed, with a kiss occurring on the 6th day and discussions of falling in love on the 9th. The author may benefit from considering a longer time frame and allowing for a more gradual and believable progression of events in the story.

It is peculiar to note that the span of the story, encompassing over 100 chapters, is condensed within a mere 10 days. The progression of events, such as the initial meeting followed by a proposal and subsequent cohabitation with twin children, appears to be hasty and unrealistic. Furthermore, the development of the romantic relationship between the characters is rushed, with a kiss occurring on the 6th day and discussions of falling in love on the 9th. The author may benefit from considering a longer time frame and allowing for a more gradual and believable progression of events in the story.

I have come across this book several times and found it interesting but never read it, because "system" is a total turn off for me.

true.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Main leads being shameless and flirting with each other is exactly what I want. hehehe. can't wait to read it. please pick this book. #sweetlove

I love it too. couldn't wait for the translations and read the raws

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

and so much better than this story. loved the main leads interaction. 😭💞

Hey. The title is "Huoye, Madam Went To the Sky Bridge Again To Set Up a Stall". If you prefer reading mtl then google this title and add the word "mtl", you will come across the "mtl website", there you can also find the Chinese title (incase you fail to find it, here's it "and霍爷，夫人又去天桥摆摊了" then google it to read raws. I hope it helps. 💞

thank you so much for answering. and it seems like this story isn't that good. I'm not gonna waste my time reading when there are so many awesome books waiting for me to read them. 🙈😂 btw 1v1 means that there's no ex-bf or ex-gf or other love interests of male leads and they are loyal to each other. Usually in stories like this one there's always a second male lead who is a gentleman and so much better than ml but he fails to make fl feel something for him. it sucks.

I agree.

omg I l y miss FL

webnovel has been corrupted

lmao naughty nympho

wait. what is dirty? finger? or that?

responsible for the "wetness"??? okkkkk

Webnovel has been corrupted. Mayday.

"Dorothy" and "David"???? Huge turn off. Stop changing characters name, webnovel. For God's sake. This is seriously annoying us readers. humph.