Metkel_Gherie

Bro why are you talking so much space of the chapter explaining about unnecessary things . Like when he’s feeling pain do you have to take quarter of page to explain how he’s feeling the pain. Honestly it’s a wonderful story with a solid history from what I’ve read but the more I read the more unnecessary stuff is piling up . Sorry if I’m being offensive but it’s too much

Excuse me but what the heck is This Ng

Bro aren’t you the same

Hey Mr author where are you ??? The waiting is becoming unbearable

If I am being honest I am not satisfied with the character of the mc

Seriously man what a scum after she personally came to save him he’s trying to kill her I hope karma will put him in a worse situation . Author what is this are you perhaps saying doing bad things is good

Why did it fail ?

Things just got ugly , Mr author why are you destroying mc’s character he’s just a complete hypocrite right now

Why’d you have to make him this cruel man killing children and the funy thing is even he was just being manipulated by the two servants and they are still alive . Sorry man can’t go on any more the story was really wonderful and the guy was great but from here on out he just became some kind of a twisted person who would do anything to achieve his goals without boundaries so it makes it hard to stomach this kind of stories

This is just too much man it could influence people in a wrong way especially if it’s the MC doing such a cruel thing because you are representing him as a justified person. I mean he could have just killed her