Siopilos

I'm definitely invested enough to continue reading, do your best! 😁

I read this story fully recently, it's impressive, and I really liked it. I kind of feel hypocritical in a way writing this. I'm sorry if I seem dumb, anyone can correct me. It's a little confusing at the beginning, with the slight ambiguity in how the main character has any clear or priority motivation. It isn't fully clear how he turned out top 10 in the school and why, as such I would recommend a little more exploration of the ideals and such of the MC. For Exa. Why is the MC required to be an assassin by night? Money? If so why is it so necessary that it is required he risk his life for it? Just... not a lot of explanations, it feels like the author wants to push forward other aspects of the story or plot without proper setup first. HOWEVER. Many aspects of the story are capable of establishing wonder and excitement in the reader. With time in writing the author will understand the importance of not going overboard with language as to suit all audiences, as recommended by another reviewer. I hope the author can continue his work. I'd be interested in seeing the direction of the rest of the novel. Also I recently created this account just to read, and review this novel. [img=recommend]

I'm really loving this so far, let's see how far you can take this, or how you will likely inflict chronic depression in stagnant/inconsistent or downright ceased updates.