Valman

En faite le noyau d'un bot et aussi importante que l'étincelle si celui-ci est touché tu peu en mourir de blessure importante donc si il en trouve un bon sachant que un bon est cher normal qu'il remplace le sien

it's cool

But your book is so good!

Tanks

You probably like it because it mixes several genres and it shows some hard truth

Thank you very much for giving me your opinion and yes I make a lot of mistakes

Valarie is a good book but the magic is not very present for the moment nor the lover I still give it a good mark because it improved in the more distant chapters

I'm Valman and discord XD

Will have to already talk about the type of magic you want in your book because I can give you tons of it but if it's a destructive thing and you do a good thing ... it does not work even with the most great goodness of the world

It's a very good story, the only flaw I find in it is its slowness and its magic that I have the impression that we show in a hurry after it's my opinion, maybe you find yourself that it's too magical but I find that it's not magical enough and that it should go deeper into it