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Leon_J

Leon_J

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Escritor Brasileiro Iniciante.

2020-10-25 đã tham giaBrazil
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
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    This combo is actually useless. The killing curse is a insta-kill, he just need to hit whit one spell.

    However, the one he received from the Quest intrigued Chris quite a bit. It was called the Sensory Deprivation Hex. At first, Chris thought he could permanently cripple his enemies, but that wasn't the case. For a second, the target would not be able to use any senses, including what some would call the 6th sense. However, the catch was that this spell can only be used on the same target every 5 minutes. While a second does not seem to be a lot, Chris knew just how overpowered it was. The 5 minute rule can just be ignored altogether as it doesn't really make a difference. If Voldemort got ahold of this hex, he could cast it and then immediately use Avada Kedavra to instantly kill his foes. It was the ultimate combo spell.
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
    trả lời JoSauer

    3 + 2 + 1 + 1 = 7 3 players 2 people whit sticks 1 Keeper 1 Seeker

    "Yes, you have heard me correctly, Nimbus 2000s. Fresh out of the parcel. 7 brooms so that you can all play with your full potential," Professor Flitwick said.
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
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    Evergreen! Great, I like that you are using his new name.

    Chris Evergreen
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
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    Well, spells work different whit living beings, especially intelligent ones like humans and centaurs.

    Reductor Curse (Reducto): Able to destroy solid objects.
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
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    Your writing is getting better. Congratulations!

    Ch 12 Joining the Quidditch Team
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
    trả lời Bleepl1

    I think it was active, just was not on the HP books because was not relevant for the history.

    -A quest has been given. You must do as well as Harry Potter and get in the Ravenclaw Quidditch Team.-
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
    trả lời Ahtu_Flagg

    Do not be so harsh on him. Chinese people aren't evil.

    "He's the head of Ravenclaw. I hope he gives us some special treatment," Chris said.
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
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    Useless spell, do not even brother.

    -You have learned Acus Verto and have earned 50 EXP. You now need 211 EXP to level up. Acus Verto need to be cast a 1000 times in order to level it up. You have earned 1 Sickle. You now have 1 G 0 S and 18 K.-
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  • Leon_J
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    To the last place you look for it. Because when you find it, you stop looking for.

    "Into non-being," Penelope answered.
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
    trả lời GloomyGod

    I agree, having a new trio would be better.

    'Well whoever this Se-yeon is, I'm hoping that she would help Harry and Ron. She's their only hope,' Chris thought.
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
    trả lời NyDarKKen

    Nobody cares about JK. She write an all white/hetero book and then pretend to be written a diverse book. Seriously, is annoying.

    "Sung, Se-yeon!" Professor McGonagall called with a bit of a struggle. Se-yeon came out. She was a Korean girl with glasses and was extremely small even among her age group.
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
    trả lời Jason_Growls

    Yes.

    "Hahaha, I knew that you wanted to be sorted there. However, I do not think you're the perfect match for that house. Therefore, I shall put you in RAVENCLAW!" The Sorting House said loudly. There was loud cheering from the Ravenclaw table to the point where it seemed like the entire room was shaking. The Slytherins looked devastated as if they lost the best prey that they have ever seen their entire life.
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  • Leon_J
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    I do like Hufflepuff, when I was younger I liked Ravenclaw, but as I grow older I become to see that friends are more important than grades.

    'Gryffindor,' Chris said.
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
    trả lời DaoistSoulDive

    I don't dislike the idea.

    And unafraid of toil;
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
    trả lời darklord_hades

    Me too! Seens like the best idea ever!

    Not put in Gryffindor?!
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
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    GOOD!

    Not put in Gryffindor?!
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  • Leon_J
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    Changing things from the original is a good idea.

    Ch 6 Hogwarts!
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
    trả lời Rkthegreat11

    you are funny

    Chris, Hermione, and Neville got into a boat with another girl that Chris has never seen before in the movies. She had large blue eyes with long straight yellow hair in a ponytail. She was also a bit taller than Hermione and her face was as white as snow without any blemishes.
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
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    Downgrade the protagonist family a little, Nevil should not be that way impress, his parents were war heroes too.

    "It's amazing that I get to see the son a my hero and the hero of the Wizarding World in one day!" Neville said with a smile.
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  • Leon_J
    Leon_J3yr
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    I do like your ideas, but try to make people sound more normal, please? I mean, they should talk about other things besides the protagonist. Keep the good work, you are doing well.

    Ch 5 Meeting an Unexpected Person
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