THOTTYSLAYER

Yo this is some gourmett level novel right here the only thing is i hope you make this super long take your time with the world building dont rush things and the harem should be slowly introduced and organically meshed well all the best

Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapter.

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Review as of chapter 14. Alright i have been following the story since the very beginning . Now let's get some basics out of the way it''s a very well written story with amazing descriptions and fights. Though there are some grammmatical mistakes they have been reducing as we progress. Moreover i noticed the auhor has corrected many of them. What i love about the novel the most is the protagonist if i have to compare him with some that can only be our beloved FANG YUAN from RI. Now don't get me wrong there are diffrences like how Long Chen can feel kinship. But the qualities that make them similar are. 1)Ambitious - Both Fang Yuan and Long Chen are very ambitious so you won't get your average Jiang Chen which has no shred of ambition whatever. Long Chen unapologetically pursuing his goals is a breath of fresh air. 2)They are both evil and they know it. A lot of protagonist like Su Zimo from ESK or Long Chen from NSBHA appear to be ruthless. IMO they are kinda okay. The author also tries to make them look the good guy by making the villains as humanely despicable as possible. That's not the case with Long Chen if you stand in his way you are a goner. He is by no means a hypocrite and understand the laws of jungle. 3)They both feel like they are in control. The last point is a bit hard to explain but lemme just say this no mc like Fang Yuan or Long Chen appear to be in complete control of the situation. It also stems fromt their arrogance that all the people around them are beneath them and mere chess pieces for them to manipulate. All in all author you better don't give up this masterpiecce.

Thanks for the chapter