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Pros-Keeps reader interested, viVid descriptions, good storyline. Cons-Grammar errors. Redundancy, slow at some points of the story, Not completely clear.

I agree, this Part of the story doesnt make sense.

Hmmmm

the book is captivating. Not every chapter is consistently written well, however the writer gives enough depth into the main characters that you are willing to overlook the incongruencies to get to the next chapter.

The store front chapter a little too cheesy! Throws off the story

Exactly

Nothing like a 40 chapter build up!😂

Romantic Novel. Storyline keeps the reader’s attention. The chapters string you along for days. One of the climaXes of the story took way to long to reach (40 chapters), and was over in one chapter. The writEr uses colorful words that are intriguing and discriptive throughout the novel.

That was fast..lol

Colorful and Engaging storyline. Keeps the reader’s attention as it builds up climaxes chapter by chapter. Interesting character defelopment.