TDWSF

In one of the episodes when he went Mach 50 he almost destroyed the world. I know you just want to show how powerful and fast he is but it just looked cringe to me. Just telling .

I guess I wanted different story-lines in this ff even if the people and the villains are the same and they do the almost same thing they did in comics. I've just read same things over and over so I've searched for something unique. Anyway I'll wait and keep reading just bc you asked me to my man.

If Damien is truly Mephisto and that contract is some kind of a soul contract I'm dropping this ff. This is the kind of awful story telling that I hate. Literally every fu.king spider man in every fu.king spider man ff his girlfriend does something extremely STUPID. Why? you may ask :) Of fu.king course to "save him". By making illogical idiotic contracts or by letting themselves get taken advantaged or some other sh.t. I thought this was a good spider man ff after so long. I was going to say nothing until this Damien stuff adressed and concluded but I couldn't hold myself. It seems like it will take a while for Damien arc or whatever but if it doesn't get adressed by Peter finding out about it or Felicia telling him I'm just dropping. I hate it when writers do this exact same thing over and over. Enough ranting... It was going good and I hope it gets fixed or I'm leaving. Thanks for the chapter and the story 👋

This is like all of the annoying fics.I really can not fathom HOW can MC's be put into situations like this. They need to be utterly stupid to fall into a trap or get stranded or sealed and more. It's like MC's can't use their brains when they get aweseome powers.Ultimatrix is literally Omnipotent even if it's restricted.Storylines like this seems utterly stupid to me.Maybe it's only to me because I can think of 10 other ways to not be put into situations like this.How can a guy with a power that lets him have literally EVERY power in existence be this unresorceful and unwise.Still a good story and there are very few good Marvel with Omnitrix fics around so I will keep reading. I just want to say you are for the last 5-10 chapters making the MC really unlikeable with all of his choices and actions and I can't see his desicions as character growth.I hope this gets better.Thanks for the chapter my man.

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Never seen this one on a relationship with an MC. Could be nice I think?

Started great went to sh*t.He makes friends and they die.He makes a friend/flirt and she dies.I guess the only way for the MC to have character development is for people close to him die.I don't even want to get in to the fact that he just left a friend alone in a dangerous mission.He just assumed she would be okay and just left.THE MC IS JUST FU*KING STUPID.

MC could've changed the outcome of this WHOLE operation but he did NOTHING?? For the entire chapter he just WATCHED as things happened??? I hope this doesn't turn out to be one of those fanfic that the MC trains like a madman but when it matters the most he just let things happen to preserve the canon.This chapter just sucked.

For immortality there is a filler arc(i think) that has something called Stone of Gelel on Naruto.Look it up if you don't know maybe you could use that if it is feasible.

I've been on Webnovel(and other platforms of course) for years and from quality work to wish fulfillment works I read almost EVERYTHING on Webnovel.This is one of the best fanfiction in this site.Characters feel like they are alive.They are not words in an Ff.Just like almost everyone in this site everyone seems to forget that Good Dialogues turns ordinary stories into amazing stories.Nothing happenes story wise or action wise but so far the story is Good. Keep up the good work please.