Ronnycoleman

One of the best novels on this platform, suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper underrated. A must read please read this. Author never give up this story will smash

Why the fuck does this beautfil novels be so underrrated but trash is being hailed as webnovels most voted novels. It pains me immensesky this is a beautful novel do yourself a favour and read this

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Alright this is my first detailed review ever. This review is until CHAPTER 39. First of all i am regular reader of this book and have been starting this from the beginning. Writing Quality- The writing quality is great, there are some grammatical mistakes but the author regularly corrects them. The fluidity of the dialogues and scenes flows really well. The vocabulary is also quite fitting. Character Design- The characters are hella unqiue and quirky, everyone has their own desires and appear to be full of life. Author also includes slice of life moments to make them appear more alive. Updates stabilty- Not the best tbh although in the last week it has been 1ch/day. World Background- Probably one of the best ever. It is extremely well fleshed out and has many layers to it. At the same time there are no info dumps we slowly get all the relevant info. Even a simple city get's enough development. Plot- Very strong and mysterious. It does not fall into the trap of cockroach and predictable villains. The characters have selfish motivations so dont expect saving the world nonsense. Protagonist- The protagonist is like no other but if i have to describe him in simple terms think of like an immortal senior reincarnated as a mortal. A regular old immortal i mean. All in all this is one of my top 5 stories on this platform. Author sama dont you dare drop this beauty.

The MC doesnt feel like a samura at all he seems like a jobber tbh. The only smilarity he bears with samurai is ruthless nature. Still a decent read though

It has some glaring weaknesses such as too many names and pwer ups thus reducng the quality of the story. I suggest a rewrite it wll fef up your game

Great story with good potential. WIll keep a eye on this one. asddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

Thang Dawg

thanks for the chapter

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