Abyss_of_Infinity
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Potential for a good face slapping story, if done correctly! The mc is overpowered af, and the story can play on how his emotions and mind develop, making it more interesting. Worth a read.
You're gonna need to pace it differently, introduce higher dimensions or new restrictions to be able to write more. At this rate, in at most 100 chapters, no new ideas will fit into this story, forcing you to discard it. Valid story and system though. Keep it up!