ZeroKi

I had big expectations after the first chapters. The initial part of the story was pretty unique, and that's it. The plot got forced a lot in different occasions and some parts didn't make any sense at all. I was expecting more from mc personality after everything he went through his last life. But immediately after he got reborn he started crying and feeling emotional after his new mom called him son. Dosent make sense at all. There is no character development at all.

Yep, some are fake

The fanfic is pretty good. The only bad stuff that can stop someone from reading it further are: - AU ( A lot of people from other animes. They always got lucky and found the perfect devil fruits for them.) - Mc tells his crew that he knows some key parts of the future. ( He told(lie) them that a guy named Oda told him some key parts of the future.)[Personal opinion: Pretty stupid if u ask me. He wanted to be honest but in the end he still lied. Just don't tell them if ur still gonna lie. ] - Some stuff isn't realistic at all. For example, mc lived in a small kingdom and a local gang got 3 devil fruits. ( Very op devil fruits ). They were gonna sell the devil fruits and other stuff and mc stole everything.( Other stuff was worth 3m ). You tell me that ur gonna sell 3 devil fruits and other stuff togheter and the other stuff is worth only 3m? while even the worst df is worth 100m. If you can ignore this stuff than give it a go, the story is pretty good with a soldi plot. Sorry for my bad English.

She still got captured by some mobs? With her potential and big mom strength? Fk off

gain most out of the siutation? And what sould he gain by saving her? enemies? Fk off eith ur hero fantasise kid

Writing quality: 4 stars Story Development: 4 stars ( The idea was pretty good and i enjoyed the bloodline part a lot. Character design: 3 stars ( The mc was raised by a spirit beast and i expected too still see this traits in him. The other characters aren't as detailed as the mc. ) Updating stability: 5 stars. World background: 4 stars.

I will not help at all, because i have a fking brain. Stop thinking with the d. u stupid idiots. This is just gonna get me more enemies without any gain, is very stupid. By ur logic from now on i should go left and right and save evry girl i meet, until one day the enemy i provoked would be too strong and is gonna maybe kill me or the people i care about. Think realistically u soo called "hero".

the writing is great. 5 stars. the story is pretty good. 4 stars. the character design is bad, and their talent and personalities dosent match the real ones.(some fo them) 2 stars. updating stability 5 stars. world background well done 5 stars. if u love adventure and u want to follow the the story of a great mc(A little simp sometimes) this is a good read for u. the system is fine, he's not gonna get super mega op immediately with 1000 devil fruits. sorry for bad grammar

the kind of mc who's never gonna kill someone who's important or a girl

he's not right at all, don't compare her with monsters like big mom. she was born average