Luna_Mermaid1
Originally from Wattpad writing my books and now expanding to new horizons.
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Luna_Mermaid14 years agocông bốThere were some punctuation issues, but other than that the plot was steady. The environment matches well with the situation that is occurring during the story. Keep up the good work!
- Luna_Mermaid14 years agocông bố
Plot is really good starting out and there is momentum into it. Read four chapters and it flows really well and the plot sticks to other elements of the story. Keep up the good work!
- Luna_Mermaid14 years agocông bố
This is a good spin on a story where the protagonist is not so innocent or heroic like a lot of stories. The writing flow is smooth, grammar is well, and the atmosphere is breathtaking from the descriptions. Definitely keeping this in my library to read. Keep up the good work!
- Luna_Mermaid14 years agocông bố
The story overall was really good, I started out with a few chapters feeling a little skeptical as this genre is not usually my cup of tea (I'm sort of a picky reader), but this is written well and the development is consistent to the story. I'll keep reading on, keep up the good work!
- Luna_Mermaid14 years agocông bố
Really liked the world description and the environment surrounding the story. Writing flow was really good, and enjoyed the snarky remarks some of the characters jabbed at either a deity or another. Keep posting!
