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Aziz_Yaakoubi

Aziz_Yaakoubi

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2020-10-12 đã tham giaGlobal
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi4d
     công bố

    random gibberish plot and very unclear goals and progression.

    Extra Pages: The Author's Odyssey
    Kỳ huyễn · Ink_Weaver122
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi14d
    trả lời Zaelum

    synopsis or link to it plz. Also is it harem or not, overpowered or not?

    One Piece: The Legend of the Star Sea
    Tranh châm biếm · Zaelum
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi15d
     công bố

    The background of the world that the author came with is interesting and not overused in other novels, though it is still very simple. The life of MC before reincarnation was kinda too much, like not even realisitic, it gives forced vibes too much, dunno if it's on purpose for plot or not. so yeah it can be said to be an amazing start, however it became absolutely bad and uninteresting at chapter 15-16 when the two half souls: Rei(old) and Raven(young) fused together. the author said it would be slow fusing but no, he literally forced it with the plot to create a new personality with the old memories, conclusion : no hope for character development and healing of Rei's mentality. stopped reading at that.

    The Extra Wants Control
    Kỳ huyễn · Kas73_
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi15d
    trả lời _MYSTERY

    makes sense, thanks for the reply

    Ch 40 Nen Class [3]
    A Wanderer's Lies
    Tranh châm biếm · _MYSTERY
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi16d
    bình luận

    thanks for the chapter also what did the broly inheritor go through for his scenario. Assuming it's super's broly, then logicaly speaking it should either be: beat gogeta which is impossible as seen in the movie. beat Goku and Vegeta which is too easy for the inheritor as also seen in the movie, cuz they needed to fuse to stomp him and finally survive against gogeta for a period of time, and thats pretty much guaranteed because gogeta won't kill him, and there was no one close to them that could be killed (by Frieza or broly) for gogeta to kill broly out of anger.

    Ch 40 Nen Class [3]
    A Wanderer's Lies
    Tranh châm biếm · _MYSTERY
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi21d
     công bố

    would have given a 5 star for the story development, however giving 1 is too good now, simply because a romance was forced so bad that a 5 star story became lackluster. it is simply disgusting now, pure bad and forced with plot, even the rewards were given simply for the romance.

    Guardian Of Infinite Earths
    Phim ảnh · BingeFics
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi22d
     công bố

    wasted my time, while it's a an absolutely amazing story, it is harem so I'm outta here.

    Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
    Tranh châm biếm · That_One_Dead_Ali
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi22d
     công bố

    falls short of expectations, saw the reviews and the ratings, it was less then what I was thinking it will be, but fine to pass some time

    Marvel: Tech System
    Tranh châm biếm · Unknown_To_All
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi1mth
    trả lời Lithiel

    run bro run, it's the worst of the worst in mtl, mc non existent literally, only appears for three line in middle chapters then no more

    One Piece Gold List: The Force Under My Command Can't Be Hidden
    Tranh châm biếm · Lost_One_01
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi1mth
    bình luận

    thank you for the chapter. the way it was said that he threw the clothes to cheadle felt kinda disrespectful, even though he wasn't, and him being excited kinda explains such choice of action, but dunno if it's just me thinking that.

    Ch 194 Chapter 194 Match With Netero
    I'm Really Not A Nen Exorcist (HxH Fanfic)
    Tranh châm biếm · God_of_Chicken
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi1mth
    trả lời Joe_Anson

    the funny part is they went with the typical face slap ladder. First arlong then tiger, all this while the marine still didn't arrive even though aokiji was deployed and marijoi was burning.

    Pirates: Check In From Mariejo
    Tranh châm biếm · Solaris_Vitally
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi1mth
    bình luận

    amazing chapter, thank you. also, is the rob Lucci kid that was there the future cp9 rob Lucci or same name?

    Ch 69 Chapter 69
    ONE PIECE : BROTHERHOOD
    Tranh châm biếm · Silent_stiele
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi1mth
    trả lời KnightShade420

    pedo detected, opinion rejected

    Naruto System Within Naruto
    Tranh châm biếm · Seion
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi1mth
     công bố

    click bait description don't fall for it if that's what you were expecting. MC kinda fluctuating between being a reincarnater and being a retarded kid, dunno why though. plot is interesting if you have the patience, however the mc is not really that redoish character. World building is good with no info dump, but a bit of a sluggish feel to it, like the world outside of MC is slow and nonexistent.

    Where the hell am I, and is that a Kaiju!?
    Diễn sinh tác phẩm · Niggross
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi2mth
    bình luận

    thanks for the chapter, but too much repetitive description that it's distracting and useless. feels more like a word filler then content. Reminds me of when namek planet was supposed to be destroyed in few minutes yet the fight was for hours

    Ch 62 Chapter 62
    ONE PIECE : BROTHERHOOD
    Tranh châm biếm · Silent_stiele
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi2mth
    bình luận

    dunno why but I feel that he will go into water and then be saved by fisher tiger that happened to be swimming to Mary joi

    Ch 61 Chapter 61
    ONE PIECE : BROTHERHOOD
    Tranh châm biếm · Silent_stiele
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi2mth
    bình luận

    thank you for all you have done, and good thing u dropped, the plot started to feel more and more forced and cliche recently.

    Ch 359 So it finally came to this....
    Arcane: Champion Witness System
    Diễn sinh trò chơi · TypicalFicEnjoyer6
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi2mth
    trả lời Mysterious_Lord

    thank you for your sacrifice comrade, you shall be remembered as the bravest of them all.

    Marvel-ous Ninjutsu
    Tranh châm biếm · Pewpewcachoo
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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi2mth
    bình luận

    thank you

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  • Aziz_Yaakoubi
    Aziz_Yaakoubi3mth
    bình luận

    thanks for the chapter, but when will the kingdom building end? it's kinda interesting but also lacks action and visuals of MC progress.

    Ch 284 -278- All it need was a single day
    Arcane: Champion Witness System
    Diễn sinh trò chơi · TypicalFicEnjoyer6
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