SecretWolf

Great Start

Novel is great, plot is good, updates seem frequent and the MC is quite interesting. you should read it if you are interested on Cultivation Novels. Hope it continues as great as it started.

Considering your name and the synopsis, I expected this to be large harem. (Disappointed that it is not.) I personally don't like most of the male characters in DD all of them take everything for granted, and plot armor, stupid reasoning and so many coincidence protect them and guide the plot in their favor. At least tell me if this going to be one of those plot that favor the main cast or destroy them.

You get an MC that you don't like and he rejects system and women. The premise is decent, MC is very very very very very boring and side characters annoying and so far 1 / 4 women is decent. If the MC or side characters were interesting enough I would continue, but I fail to find a decent enemy to root for. I see no character I like apart for the secretary, which is ok. I want someone to write a villain fan fic for this where the secretary gets saved and the rest of the cast disappears. PS also the kid and her mom should be saved from a life of boredom. Character design should not be negative because of secretary and the kid and her mom. As some have said the story might get better later but I cant get past reading 70 chapters of this.

This is very interesting and one of the most imaginative and best stories in here, the plot is interesting, the characters are great, the women in the story is wonderful and the story and plot is very well done. Keep up the great work. If you are interested in this book just read 30+ chapter you will like it, if you are a fan of the tags. The pacing of story and characters are well done that I could not find any negative things to say about this novel.

Thanks

I don't know why any Author would think let me show MC's potential woman with someone else, and also make it worst by add so much detail and expect people to like this. Also let me make the MC enjoy that and say "You will be mine." after that. I don't want to wonder/see what will happen in the future, I am out.

It is not bad plot just seen it too many times.

You forgot Luck without it talented people and hard working people will have no life.

I have read it, and you are right the evil in that is done well and there are reasons for his and most of the others characters' actions. That world as a whole works for that story. Plus the system and it's mission are entertaining. That was a good pick mate any other recommendation you have?