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Rowan_Mcc1mthcông bốThe vocabulary and grammar seems to be fluid, but the story lacks that life that characters should have, for a story about time i find it ironic that there is almost no time perception, we dont know dates, we dont know time skips, everything is happening in one long day with no breaks but substantial amount of activity, i love the idea of a character similar to Wanda but Time stone affected h instead, its just the execution of how you're pacing this story is all over the place, and Ethan just doesn't have Thoughts, i want to know whats going on in his head, but its never fully explained why he is doing what hes doing, it just seems like the timeline for the novel is all over the place with no perception on how long anything is going to take or going to be.
- Rowan_Mcc2mthbình luận
breaking it down?
It may be hard to actually understand, but breaking it down, there were at least six ways it could be used. - Rowan_Mcc1yrtrả lời Josh_Richie
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Level: 13 (161,700/204,800 EXP) - Rowan_Mcc1yrtrả lời Edwin00001
not to Dudley at this point in time, he was a frail kid who would get beat up by dudley and his friends and if he did anything to dudley, petunia and vernon would most likely starve him
Harry seemed to shrink at the boys presence and words and looked at Nick with teary eyes expecting him to agree with his cousin like everyone seems to. This didn't happen however as instead Nick stared Dudley in the eyes without restraining his magic making the boy recoil in instinctive fear. "How so?" Nick asked calmly and clearly without any emotion at all. Dudley froze at the question as his atrophied brain cells tried to find an answer but he could only spew out "Because my parents said so!" angrily trying to justify himself. "I didn't ask what your parents said...." Nick intensified his magical pressure on the boy "I asked how he was a freak." he said coldly.- - Rowan_Mcc1yrtrả lời TFH
parrots=People fr
"Umm..so how exactly did I die? And also who are you, sir..?" I wasn't really sure if I called this person? If this being is even considered as such, but anyway they look like a person, but I can't determine which gender they are. - Rowan_Mcc1yrbình luận
people who said this book was boring are only reading books for OP characters who completely alter the world around them, this fanfic has character development and amazing story arcs, it has subtle hints to the future and seemingly in depth planning, its a proper story, so good job author
Ch 26 Arc VIII Last days before travel - Clean up - Rowan_Mcc1yrbình luận
if eli somehow got this into hela's system would she then lose her powers and be susceptible to magic?
Maya, or Barb now, had finished Extremis for Asgardians. However, it turned out, that the variant she had created would strip him of his magical blood. Since it was magic and science, they didn't come to a scientific explanation. Only that his connection to magic would be used up by Extremis as a different kind of energy. Eli didn't like the trade off, so he didn't take the Asg-Extremis. - Rowan_Mcc1yrtrả lời Squeaky_08
probably dead or imprisoned because she worked with Grindelwald
He met Jacob Kowalski, Newt Scamander and his wife Porpentina Goldstein, who gifted him a customized briefcase with a lab and room inside, Beauxbatons Professors (Madame Maxime included), and Thomas Dupont, the French Minister for Magic. - Rowan_Mcc1yrtrả lời MichaelJones98
i believe English isn't their first language, so some words will not translate correctly
The Gringotes Witch Bank. - Rowan_Mcc1yrbình luận
i believe horace said seven pieces of the soul, so there should only be 6 horcruxes, harry was never meant to be a horcrux, but he made it 7 horcruxes unknowingly, so that would make 8 soul pieces
Harry scratched his chin, turning away from the room as he continued through the house. "Five," he concluded. "Horace said seven, but he hasn't made Nagini yet." - Rowan_Mcc1yrbình luận
i personally find bacchus easier to pronounce and hes just the roman counterpart of Dionysius
Unique Skill [Entertainment] evolved into [Entertainment King Dionysus]. (A/N: If you have a better name for the God/being associated with entertainment, I am open for suggestions.) - Rowan_Mcc1yrbình luận
you keep changing to him or her, so im confused what it actually is
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - Rowan_Mcc1yrbình luận
Rest in Peace
Several tentacles popped out, tore the four talkative bugs into several pieces. Then, Serleena stepped out of the elevator. - Rowan_Mcc1yrbình luận"Yeah," I coughed, "tell me, do you bleed?"
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A series of unthortunate events
"Damn! This wasn't on the job description boss. Six months into the job and we're already up against myths, what next gods?" Barton complained with a weak smile on his face. - Rowan_Mcc1yrbình luận
all these comments about how he doesn't even look that strong. have you ever read lookism? like the amount of scrawny people who are really strong
A rather lonesome figure approaches the school gates, it's most certainly male judging by the broad shoulders and tall body. The guy in question is not wearing the traditional school uniform or even a modified version of it. He's wearing his own style of clothes which certainly helps attract the attention of any passerby students. A pair of red-tinted circular glasses comfortably hide his seemingly tired eyes from view, a black backpack is slung over his left shoulder. The man is wearing a half-zipped up and baggy black jacket, dark blue jeans and black sneakers. Certainly not the most fashionable style of clothing out there but he somehow manages to make it look at least acceptable. His skin is pale and he has a couple of piercings in both of his ears and at the left side of his lips. While the boy's fashion sense leaves much to be desired, his face certainly has characteristics many would classify as "handsome".