OkayVelvet

And Sarah or whatever her name is, is a mule in my eyes 🤓

Why not date someone that's actually hot if you had the choice? Pretty boring to choose a twilight chick

I don't even watch or read Twilight. But from what I've seen most choose a female character from the story who are not even as beautiful as a supermodel, just my opinion.

My idea would be that it should match or at least compliment your fighting style of Assassin Combat Priest build 😁 Martial arts and exorcism abilities for example! something related to enhancing or changing the human body could work as well, or related to magecraft because magic is fun!

Do you have a discord? 😊

I genuinely enjoyed reading this story. I would support you more if I could 👍❤️

Why read it when it's just 18+ dialogue every. single. chapter. 🙄

How does someone fumble their own fanfiction THAT BADLY!! Oh yeah, 18+ cringeworthy dialogue that make no sense whatsoever and are always thrown in the middle of the story🤦 You shouldn't have put any expectations on this story and neither should I

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The fact this is the most popular novel on this site means there's a lot of edge lords that eat this shit up, I completely agree it ruins it for me.