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Really good!

and vice versa

Honest Review! Writing Quality:5/5-I see no grammar mistakes and it is much better than those trash translation and bad grammar Fics. Stability of Update:5/5-Since it's just four chapters in. Story development:5/5-Loving it. Mc is the grandson of Tobirama. Character desig:5/5-Good World Background:I am loving it!

Since this book is just beginning, I'm reviewing it So the plot is well Mc transmigrates as Matsuda! The story is readable I did see some grammar mistakes but no typos. Keep going mate!

One Piece is all about crews and friendship not Harem or Romance. Sure there are kingdoms and such but do you really think the female would love to be in a Harem and look at the title MARINE, you think WG will allow Mc to get a harem of PIRATES?

I mean nah

It will be but will take a little while

i mean they HELPED fairy tail..you don't pay good with evil unless you a villian

nah bro if I drop it's either if I die or things like that

I mean killing Vali is IDIOTIC