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its good what else can i tell you. There's no need for super long essays just to ultimately say its good.
i am by no means an expert in this but i have read many, and i mean many fanfics in this app and outside of it, and this fic feels pretty average, not terrible but also not great. The story is fast paced that i think i will forget what happened in just a day, like there's not even like a training stuff just some time skip then bam something evolved, there's also stuff with how their pokemon get caught it feels kinda force, so yeah fast paced. The dialogue also feels robotic sometimes dunno how to explain this it just feels like it to me. So all in all read it if you're just passing time and have nothing better to do . there may have some like fast paced tags in it and people may like counter well achktually me but oh well you win some you lose some.
mebe this for guild name
sry internet corrupted me and this is what i imagine when i see swordfight
then i will be here reading your works and see where this journey will go :)
thanks for the chapter! got a quick question will drifter get like a special weapon/class to use like kirito using two swords or will he stick to using spears?
stop laughing*