ThaliaAndrea

Love the storyline and character development. Enjoy how the write has include some of my favorite dc series. Like he fact the story is more about the MC enjoying and taking advantage of his second life, and being more grounded, then OP. Wish the writer would continue and finish the story.

Heavy Gear Mech. They can walk or move like a vehicle on wheels/treads. Pilots even use the wheels/treads like skates.

As I was reading these chapters, I noticed a familiarity with DP9: Heavy Gear, as in their mechs have a neutal net. It's to help the pilot operate the mech and learn from the pilot over time. Basically, it works as a second pilot.

Great story. The storyline is well designed and has a decent pace to it. The MC is decently flushed out and has a great backstory. MC is not overly OP, and his inactions with other characters are enjoyable, especially with Kenobi. They gave of the vibe of "the odd couple". Thanks for such an enjoyable and awesome story.

Love the storyline. It had great main character that isn't OP or too self detrimental. The storyline a great pace and easy flow as it progress. Very well developed interaction and relationship with support characters. It's a very enjoyable slice of life that I'm always looking forward. [img=recommend]

Writer is long winded and tends to repeat himself too much. The MC intro was like 10 chapters long and about half of the content was repeated. Intro could have been done in like 2, at most 3 chapters. Writer also advertises his patreon site and stuff, way too much.

Love the main character. He had depth and background. The world was very well set out and felt like the marvel world. Love the fact the writer introduced some of the "smaller stage" heros and villians.