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KoCatt

KoCatt

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Writer Reader Space Freak

2020-09-21 đã tham giaEgypt
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  • KoCatt
    KoCatt4 years ago
     công bố

    The writing style of the author was fascinating, rarely any grammatical errors made the book even more easy to understand. The concept is great, and story development is totally apart of this novel. Keep the good work coming! [img=recommend]

  • KoCatt
    KoCatt4 years ago
     công bố

    The plot is interesting, the author's writing style is great and character development is surely part of it. It was goo so far, hoping for more content. I just suggest to use more ornamental words then simpler ones because it sometimes puts off the reader, and I think being more descriptive will surely improve the book by a sharp rate. But overall, it was a great book!

  • KoCatt
    KoCatt4 years ago
     công bố

    I only read the first few Chapters, but it's absolutely great. You write so well, I'm very impressed. It just seems a bit fast paced, but nothing too big. Keep it up!

  • KoCatt
    KoCatt4 years ago
     công bố

    This book was absolutely write a read, I love it! I loved how it portrayed the emotions in the chapters so beautifully. One thing I would suggest on improving on is being more descriptive when describing scenes, overall this is a good story! [img=recommend]

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  • KoCatt
    KoCatt4 years ago
    bình luận

    Why am I laughing? ;-; This chapter was great!