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I would like our protagonist to be able to do Volund with his invocations and each one gives him different abilities, like in Shumatsu no Valkirye, that is to say that he does Volund with Bellatrix and is more skilled with dark magic that could use shadows like in solo leveling, and If you use it on Lily Evans, make her more skilled with fire spells or give her the Dragon Slayer magic of Natsu from Fairy Tail or the magic of Mereoleona Vermillion from Black Clover like your magic zone.

I wonder if you could introduce kakegurui later, I wonder if Ichigami will be good at gambling and win his future with gambling, ichigami in kakegurui please.

It doesn't matter, there will be more time for Kaguya x Ishugami later, our protagonist deserves everything, even Shinomiya Kaguya

Oshi no ko, and that Ishigami can sing, mainly anime openings, it would be great if he sang the openings of Kaguya-sama love is war. Although I wonder if you can include the world of Baki or Kengan Ashura so that Ichigami doesn't look so weak.

If the system asks him to make the waifus of the story fall in love with who better than Kaguya, Hayasaka and Fujiwara, I am sure that if he is with Kaguya (the main heroine of the story) he would get a great reward from the system.

I would like to see more anime opening songs

I wouldn't mind Atom-Eve's biological mother but I wouldn't recommend Nolan becoming a woman, rather I think it would be better to go to a reality where Nolan is a woman and take her later to the original reality of Invincible, if so then to At least I wouldn't accept it, well this is just a recommendation because after all the story is yours.

The story is good but I don't like the errors in the writing, you say that the character's name is Evan but it always says Ron as his name, you say that he ate a Zoan-type fruit but it says that he uses Enel lodge-type abilities, okay, are you. You translate it doesn't matter, ok you change some things it doesn't matter, but if you are going to change them, keep them changed and don't put the translated chapters and the chapters rewritten by you in disorder or at least be a little more consistent with the name and the abilities of the protagonist .

thanks for the chapter, and more chapters please

I loved the story although I read it when it was finished, I must say that I like how the story was, the character design and how it gradually moved away from Voldemort and more towards a true fusion of Tom and Harry.