Mightiest_Disciple

Hey author one thing. Will the MC be getting ancient Humanities tech, they did rival the forerunners if not surpass them.

Hey Author! As a JJK fan I love your series. But as I read I noticed that Cleave works differently in your story than in JJK. Was it changed by his system? In the series Cleave can only be used while touching somebody, while normal slashes from Sukuna are dismantle. I am just curious if that was an intentional change.

My apologies. I figured a first person perspective was better writing wise ya know?

My apologies it seems I somewhat misread that first bit. Allow me to correct. He has heard of the anime before, but never actually watched it. Looking back, making it a reincarnate may have been a poor choice. However, being surprised at someones wisdom is nothing uncommon.

I appreciate the comment Etiger. However, I do want to answer your question. In the series the Inner eye is depicted as a technique that is very difficult for people to master, especially young people. This is told to us by the Elder himself in the series. That is one of the main reasons he was surprised. Now, as for your claims of using chatgpt to write this story, that is untrue. I do use AI to help improve my writing but the story and the direction of the plot are all my own work. I simply use AI to show me where I can improve as I prefer to use more poetic language. If that is not something that interests you then I am sorry but this is not the story for you. But thank you again for the comment and I hope you find a story that you enjoy.

Maybe, who's to say.

Ah that is a fair point. But now now, I like to take good constructive criticism to improve the writing of the story. So if he has something to add I always love to hear it.

It was mainly meant to show that he used the stance for the wrong situation, and got punished for it.

I am glad you are enjoying the story!

Though I must add that the Inner Eye is a technique that all masters eventually learn. So him teaching her the inner Eye makes sense.