Callain_DarkHawk

story concept is great but the stating the same thing over and over makes the pace slower than it should be and over explaining and double to triple explaining makes me not want to read it very often also books don't need all the peanut gallery chatter have some background characters say something and later get face slapped later but don't write a half to whole chapter on people saying stupid things and agreeing with each other its just unneeded and pointless

if apm goes down as you age how do people who type for a living type 100-160 wpm as they get older again as people age they get better until degeneration sets in in their sixties or seventies

in a game that is an rpg it is stupid to say a person is old at 28 especially if they have played the game for years they would get better the longer they play the same character as they are more familiar with the move sets and have muscle memory as well as being better mentally than a person at 18

thats a false peak brought by the industry it is complete crap as a person at 28 will have better experience control problem solving and skills than a person at 18 including hand eye coordination so physically and mentally a 28 year old would dominate especially in a game they had played for longer

no just no. Eyelashes are hair folicals not surgically alterable. even fantasy must have some semblance of reality.

i think author has mixed his mythological creature up Cerberus has three heads a hydra can have up to 9 but typically is depicted as having 7

the next sentence after paragraph is non sensecle why ask if they are dumb or dumb ask if they stupid or idiotic

I don't know why a power skill in a game would have such long cool downs if they did in the current games no one would use them I don't know what games you play but mmorpgs and then game the rules for mmorpgs are based on D&D even skills and moves that have long cool downs just need long or short rest which is at most 1 day

because magic! items resize to their owner

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