Alex_Lindhe

Contrast-->match/combo or whatever.

The most disturbing image I've ever seen. Both human and animal ears and worst of all, the tail coming from the crotch.

Divinity*

I like somewhat where this is going, but there's some problems that needs adressing. First of all, the spelling. Spelling mistakes everywhere. Fix it or get an editor. Second, There's no scene changes anywhere, so it's pretty confusing when it jumps from different places and sometimes with the same POV which means that time has passed without notice. Third, impossible large amount of stuff like money. Like please... 14 million gold from a maester??? 21 thousand ships made in what? A year? 3 Years? It's hard to know because you skip that information. I don't believe that Olivia can make that many ships. Maybe take it back a notch, like at maximum 100 ships. And even then it's quite a lot.

What you on about??? 4.5 tons is closer to double what you just said. 2000kg is 2 tons. And that's closer to your 4400 pounds.

Dude... You just stole it from Cryshy at Scribblehub... It's called "Corruption in Naruto World". You can read it to chapter 88. Not that I've read your other novels, but it makes me wonder where you stole them from.

Very good so far. I hope that Ezdazar can get some true loyalty from some drukhari and not having to worry about every drukhari potentially betraying him, especially those closest to him.