NeedaBreak4mLife

Should it be "...he snapped his fingers as [he] pointed at her..."?

Ah, got it, I understand what you meant now ☺️ I'm sorry it happened to you. It's sad that a parent would do this to their own kids in real life and not just in novels. Hope you found that special someone or place where you can feel safe with/at.

Swan's dad remarried this Anastasia lady after her mom died, so not her step-father.

Sorry for the delayed response! No, this is a separate novel that can be read on its own. The ML's parents are Kate and Henry, which are the leads in another novel by Pupa, He Stole Me From My Deadbeat Husband 😄

Forgot to mention that there were a few instances where the wrong pronoun was used for Theo, unless it was intentionally done but it didn't seem to be 🤔

I like how we're learning the new world Damien suddenly finds himself in through his lens. All of Damien's uncertainty, inner thoughts, and actions make this book a good read. I look forward to seeing how he will navigate this world and how his interactions with Theo will turn out 🤭 Writing is pretty good with minimal to no errors. Story telling is also great. Keep up the good work, Author!

I'm glad Kyle has someone like Ethan and Ethan's family who can give him the love and care he deserves. The story is very dark with lots of extreme negative thoughts, but the author is very good at writing and weaving everything together. I just want to give Kyle a big bear hug and fight off his bullies. He doesn't deserve any of this. I wonder why his family treats him that way... Looking forward to Kyle leaving behind his messed up family and just riding off into the sunset with Ethan 🥰

I really like how both the ML and FL are written, and their overall interactions. It's very relatable and realistic, and that's the appeal of the story. This novel is more of a slow burn, but I look forward to Elara and Terrence's relationship blooming. Very minor grammar and spelling errors, but overall a good job in writing style. Maybe avoid the constant usage of "male" but instead use "him/he" or even his name? Just a suggestion. Keep up the good work though!