ThienQuangHuynh
i like fantasy
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How about you keep writing until you either are blessed by the algorithm or join more competition?
add a new chapter and change chapter type to axillary
from here, i wanna talk about your writing style, not the story in general, it is uncommon to have a chapter that is 4 pages shorter, but i guess thats fine, but the sentences though, the way you write " , " is odd, usually, the punctuation should be ", " btw, some parts were repeated somewhere between chapter 1 and 2, hope you'll fix this :)
theres a feature, aka chapter 0 which allows you to write prologue ffs
lmao nice