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ananimeglover

ananimeglover

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2020-08-14 đã tham giaGlobal
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  • ananimeglover
    ananimeglover3 years ago
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    at beginning the story started strong and I had high hopes for it but as it progresed I found many plotholes . the characters being disposed when not need story lines being cut at rendom point no proper flow or stoey. at this point i feel like the author writting whatever comes at mind and mid story finds it boring and drops it. no offence though i admire the author for its work and thought. but i feel like this could be a jem if certian things were changed. 😘