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Thanks for the heads up. just load it in grammarly and found 79 errors and made changes. The story though has its reasons. Thanks for reading.

The historical description is well researched, even the weather, or book authors cited with lists. This may be off putting to some considering that most reader want the first three chapters as engaging as possible. But this maybe the author's narrative style, even the use of words, and flow of sentences. But as you go along, the conflict is slowly revealed from among the characters, with lots of dialogue and this may be intentional to keep reader glued. Nice book. Keep it up!

Some reader would truly appreciate the historical facts...I guess a lot more would want Tania's story rather than historical facts. But I guess it is just your style.

interesting historical facts

Detailed history.

An is repetitive....An only child of her parents.

This is about a novel within a novel which makes me think maybe the inside novel being referred to is not "shitty" as the narrator suggests but more exciting in my opinion because why would the author tell it? and tell in his POV. Anyways, each writer has his own style, originality, point of view and this novel has lots of check points on that. But this has gained a lot of hits and more popular that I thought. Go ahead this is a good premise and would attract fans of this genre. I am more into dialogue intensive novels but you will certainly gain a lot of fans from this game world system genre as this is the current trend. Thanks and have fun!

try inserting.....who this woman might be -- its kind of complicated--

in is bed to...in his bed...