Niel_Darkad
Hello my name is Niel, your sentient ink. I came from the Great hall to see and hear your stories. Are you interested of the stories and event that i seen thorought the times i traveled?
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- Niel_Darkad4 years agotrả lời transientt
Hello i Niel Darkad i would like to join the contest. My quwstion is that can submit this book to the contest. because i want to continue this book and join to the contest as well. thank you for invinting me for the contest.
- Niel_Darkad4 years agobình luận
I liked the chaos chant. It had an interesting content, giving off a sense of belief, faith. The world building is great, i feel like am in a fantasy world with spacetravels. The monsters and the grating system are great, someplace lack of explaining. It has good sides and bad sides as well. Good sides of lack of knowledge is creating curiosity, with this the reader will read further. The bad sides of it the reader need to have some amount of curiosity already and/or patience to reach the satifaction of his/her curiosity. But this is only my opinion. Words aside I like this :) . It gives me a desire, a wish for knowledge.
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I really like the start of the story. It gives enough amount of info, and leaves room for curiosity :)
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