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Honestly this makes me feel weird, the develpment of the story isn't the best, the MC hides his powers just because he feels like it, the reason the author give us for that is cheap. Anyway the idea around the story is really creative and a cool idea you can find interesting things in the story but the way the caracthers interact it's also cheap they don't feel alive they feel like bad written villains I think the authors take too much of Xianxia shit because everyone feels like a young master even more the prodigies I can recommend the story and tell you all to give it a try to write your own conclusions but it fails to deliver a lot.

This chapter has a lot of grammar mistakes

Sigh the most used cliche in fate fics, why did you all bother. Him being a troll is fanon

A cool start, people whining about him being a human what did they expect an Eldar? Let's see how the story builds itself this chapter is an excellent introduction

This is so out of place in a cultivation novel I feel like the humor is being too forced

This should have AU in the title I wanted to see the IMPERIUM of man not a bastardized version of it, I mean the 40th millennium and all that. It doesn't really feel very 40k, I thought it was going to start at the unifications wars it could have been more interesting than a huge steamroll of empire. It can be interesting but not my cup of the tea Edit: So my review it's my own personal view don't let you be discourage to read, It's very interesting and very well writing if you are willing to give it a try

Jeez calling it negligence, while it may be so for the author it's a harsh word for superman who just met superboy

Really amazing of you to use her death as reference for where are we in the canon

The problem with depends in the wideness of dungeon caves, but I think it's gonna work in the anime tunnels are wide enough

This could be better if instead of telling, you show the interaction.