Green_duckling

Got em wrapped around her finger miss Elise

This was ultimately a very good book and I’m super glad I found it. I do think you should weave in a little more doubt about her being in love with the King but other than it I absolutely loved it and am so glad you decided to share it with us ❤️

Awww why did she have to dieeeee why couldn’t she find a way around it 😭😭😭😭😭😭 but I’m so happy they’re together againnnnnnnn UWGH I want a sequel‼️‼️‼️

Writing Quality: 1 star Compared to some of the other books on this site, the grammar isn’t actually that bad but what I do hate is that it’s like they’re having two conversations at once. Like Sidney would say somegthing and then say something else and then Azalea would reply to what he said first and then what he said second. It might just be me but I was really confused reading it. Also there is a chapter just filled with a few repeated paragraphs. Updating Stability: 5 stars It’s completed so I really don’t know but without this 5 star rating the overall rating would only be 1.8 Story Development: 1 star They fell in love just on their first day together, even though Sidney swears he wants to take it slow. Character Design: 2 stars They do a good enough job for Sidney, giving him a personality, background, and describing at least some of his features, but with Azalea, she has no personality and then suddenly becomes flirty, is overly calm about the situation even though she was sober when he proposed and they don’t even describe her features for like 20 episodes but then when they finally do all it is is we find out her hair is ebony black-brown. And she seems heavily uninterested in meeting her parents, which I could understand but she should at least be a little bit hesitant to decline his offer. World Background: 2 stars They do a good enough job about being diverse in the places Sidney and Azalea go but there’s no description about it so when they were walking around the company building I just imagined the most generic thing possible and they don’t even describe the penhouse so it’s just a regular apartment in my mind. Overall Rating: 2.6 stars It could have been better, really, and it isn’t even the story I was promised from the synopsis so I’m heavily disappointed in this book, please author, take this review as creative criticism and polish up the book a bit and change the synopsis :)

Why are there repeating paragraphs? Author! Come fix this please!

Ohhh! I didn’t know you were back! Welcome and thanks for coming back! I missed your story sooooo much it’s my second favorite (I found a new favorite while you were gone, sorry 😅) but I’m so hooked! More! More! More!

Enamored, love, you should be enamored 🥰

At this point imma just kill James myself. I’m tired of her mentoning him when she clearly doesn’t need him. I know she can feel the chemistry because I can and I’m not even in the book she’s just being stubborn 🤦🏽‍♀️

He liked it Em that’s why he doesn’t want any other guy to see it. Mmm this is my favorite ship hands down

My dude really went there just to call him a virgin 😂😂😂 That’s friendship at its best right there!