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Oh I won’t tell you what to do with your novel…but I have suggestion. Is it possible to make the yanderes part of the same soul? It could make the end and journey feel pretty satisfying knowing one had read their entire love story spanning multiple world. Rather than it being many yanderes who will never appear again. Audience retention may be higher. Of course this is just an idea since I have no clue as to what story you may wish to tell.
Are all yanderes part of the same soul or are they all different people? If they are different will it be a harem?
I actually thought the dragon was naive!
Your words made double check if this was harem…phew, luckily it’s not.
“…” her intelligence…questionable indeed
I don’t remember superman or supergirl having such an ability though. Author if you want to make a fanfic there should at least be some sort of basis to add new abilities. If Superman actually has such an ability then…oops!
I love how she forgets her ideals as soon as there is a problem. She’s so cruel and cold hearted when killing low level thugs but freezes at a time like this. I don’t even know why she keeps getting involved with Gotham . She really needs a heavy dose of kryptonite to wake up. I already dislike her killing ideology…and now she fumbled like this.
Isn’t she worried about messing up the timeline ?
I can’t understand her Ideology, Lex a potential bad guy that can kill millions she let him go so easily after one meal. Is she an npc? Was she like oh that’s my brother’s friend can’t kill him. Nope. What I’m trying to say is if Kara has to wait for him to kill or harm others to decide to kill him…is this her justice or is it justification for being lazy. Because, a good upright young man suddenly went bald and evil. Isn’t that concerning? But this girl was like oh he’s good after sharing a meal, is there no follow up? Does she think she can stop a cannon event with some food. She must have forgotten in some way that a superhero also saves people not only protect. Does she really understand what it means to be a hero. Why does she even want to be one, because of her cousin in the future is one? This decision shows that she is at least a little indecisive about her ideal.
Cripple him, it’s just a gang leader. The extreme thought that she has to kill to protect when there are other ways means she doesn’t care to put much thought into it and just chooses the simple way out. I wonder once an innocent civilian does something bad and she kills them. Only to find out that they were forced to be bad, where does her gibberish philosophy come into play? Will she feel remorse and change her ways or will she think she’s right because he was going to kill millions of people. The same people she’ll protect if threatened can press the big red button to protect themselves or even those they care about.