Jieldan

it was good theme I like at the beginning, but it was changed to become same ordinary cultivation story, and to be honest the story becomes much ordinary, the difference was instead getting skill from the master or someplace it was from his daughter. and to be honest I don't like how the MC way of thinking changes after he got the system, instead thinking as a father, the MC becomes much more thinking like a martial art people, he become like he protecting his daughter and make her life safely to become stronger.

To be honest I have different expectations with this, i thought it will be unique, but it was just ordinary cultivation story. and the theme is good, it was about balacnce of Good and Evil but it was a lot disappointing, why? because the MC needs balance of Good and evil act but the disappointing was the act of Good and evil was not that balance. The MC can help old woman cross the street will be see good act. but when the MC needs to do evil act he needs to do most worse evil act to be count as Evil act. Also The theme was Balance of Good and Evil but MC Full blown evil and just do Good act just as requirement, So The MC more like a villiain that sometimes doing small good act.

this was great Novel about the mystery and detective, it was nice read if you like this kind of novel like lord mystery, even though one thing that keep bothering me, that was the MC to OP in beginning, MC can kill each enemy he see without any struggles was sometimes make it boring.