What took you so long?

Couldn’t you have put this before all that monologue I was confused about what she was smiling about

What’s up with that cringe song playing in the back of the two chapters?

We ignoring how he kidnapped Nomu?

A fight that should’ve taken a paragraph took 2/3 days worth of chapters. God I love the Chinese

It’s a Chinese fic don’t expect much IQ usage here

You forgot to remove the Ai bit here

Yeah this chapter was a chapter of nothing, to sum it up, fairy lady was like “I’m not leaving” and demon was was like “ haha im evil die!”

Chinese author try not to make protagonist frail and seem weak *Impossible*

Really need to know if the he’ll be a woman forever, assassination plot line was kinda stupid aswell, very easily could dismiss it as a body double for extra security. Loads of details I could get into but I cba writing them just like you

A few chaps of posturing now I’ll just save up for the nest couple dozen

So the story started with him being Gods child, practically the improvement of Trixhea, and he’s here now as a Yokai playing lord? Did I miss something or what?

One month later…..

Only 1 chapter for a Christmas present? Disappointed

I’m guessing the average IQ went down in the world too? Oh look a massive eagle that can fit 4 people on it comfortably! They’re loss they’re not with us! Bruh

When was the last time Edward interacted with someone else? Apart from Morgana?

The legendary mechanic?

How is pretty young? Child young? Or adult young? Because no offence I absolutely despise child MCs

Bro stop making banging fanfics please 🙏