MadFool

The MC is recklessand contradictory making the few dozen chapters a pain to read. The side characters feel very superficial and illogical, especially in the beginning the interaction between the MC and Knowledge Keepers was awkward and honestly stupid; they could have easily followed the Mc back and looted the house and artifact since Mc spilled that the one person that could act as a deterrence had already left. The pathway is a mess and the fact you need rituals to advance in every sequence just to make the already original pathway more special feels redundant. The fact Mc didn’t ”transmigrate” alone and isn’t the only one in the same Old One pathway is also a minus for me, some may like it but lets face it LoM is filled with eldritch beings that can be used as further antagonists and you really don’t need to pull some fellow worker that was in the same company from your a** to make it more appealing. Writing quality is readable but nothing amazing and same is for style. Updating seems to be quite stable, as for world building, well it is LoM so it can’t be too bad.

Sengoku and Garp both have Conqueror's and they are fine. Just because a kid has Conqueror's doesn't mean they will instantly kill him, it would most likely depend on his ambition.

I have no problem with having ambitions but arrogance bordering pure delusion, which MC exhibits, is a whole different story.

It’s a great story but the Mc ruins it for me. He was fine at the start but now that he has started to gain strength he goes around mocking everyone he meets like Fujitora, Garp and Dragon. The fact he does this completely unprovoked is what bugs me the most. Should’ve expected this from a chinese ff tbh. As I previously said, idea is great although completely ripped off from The Legendary Mechanic and translation quality is good and if you can ignore the antics of Mc this is a decent read.

Too slow, 160 chapters and MC is still in North Blue and most of the story after he joins Doflamingos family feels like a filler, especially the system tasks. Also the quality of the translation drops drasticly in later chapters, feels like the translator lost motivation to keep going and is simply posting slightly edited mtl here. MC himself is likeable so I find it to be a shame that the story progresses slowly and the system tasks are mostly boring.

Nope, you just need strength. Hell, even Shanks with his strength is relatively laid back. Even Blackbeard could take insults right to his face and simply laugh it off. Being arrogant is simply a choice, in no way is it a necessity.

This is pure mtl with pretty much no editing done to make it more readable. Story itself is average chinese ff, nothing really special but also not the worst. Mc mimics Aizen’s style somewhat and lacks the general arrogance that many chinese mc’s usually have. Give this a shot only if you have nothing better to read, otherwise don’t waste time on this. (Review left aftet 70 chapters)

You should google middle aged😑

Plot seems interesting so far, grammar is decent and not much can be said about the baby MC for now. Atleast he doesn’t seem to be an edgelord so that is a plus. But what does bug me is the constant shift in POV’s that happens 3-5 times in a chapter. This wouldn’t be so bad if the chapters were around 5-10k words but with only 1-2k it is literally 300-500 words and a shift. It constantly breaks the immersion of the reader and the author could have easily dedicated a whole chaptee to the different POV’s instead of making this bothersome constant jumping between characters.

I hope you didn’t lie to me because I will be giving this a second chance. I nearly dropped this when seeing how MC was acting like a knock off version of Naruto.