idk what else could be done, she could have stayed if not for luke, leaving him injured in the battle would ending up with him dead

tftc, im guessing that his teigu translates venom in buffering for his bodily skills, just dont know what else comes from the jordmungandr (size, infinity analogy (eating its own tail), etc.)

Finally i got up with the releasing, i am a little worried with a lot of moments and insights that overlap between luke and alex, some make sense (like hating their forced negligent parents) others are a little too much (like misunderstanding hal's final message) but i did read your other work and i hope they are not a ctrl c ctrl v from each other, or a simple change of roles. (since kronos would win with a protogenoi demigod body) anyways , tftc

this logic does not make sense for me, even in the emotional way, i would 100% go to a camp with safety wards rather than fight for my life and jump at shadows 24/7 in the open world, Alex and the others are just a little bit rebellious to do that

its obviously ivy, but its okay, he need to be dumb so the plot rolls as you want

i am still here, waiting.

he probably Will be childish

thnks king

i dont really judge her, he grew up knowing only Al, her mother was absent a Lot of time and her father ill, growing in a castle in the middle of nowhere only with a brother makes you crave New people, but she still did a Lot of mistakes

he remembers me of a Younger Lockhart, i imagined him more "griffithier"

+1 i liked both this and the vampire one, but since this is probably end faster, then i can wait for the other later

i think the point is: peter is a 7 ft lizard that can break walls with a punch, he could just make him tetraplegic, killing just feels... over? but im not the writer, you are.

Gwen isn't the MC, but good lord, you wrote her so good until now. Showing the flaws both in her and in Peter was a really good move too, and i wouldnt be able to find a better answer to killing for saving. Tftc

both have good points, having bystanders dying left and right because everytime the villains come back (i dont know how Batman has such indomitable will) is a very depressing way of life, but killing is killing, there is something in taking lives that is groundbreaking (i dont expect any understanding from edgy teenagers). So i dont know how author is going to solve this, Gwen becoming a darker Spider is more likely than Peter developing empathy or mercy, being totally cold with car crashs and others dont look like a healthy behaviour. Btw Tftc

the flags, the flags are everywhere. every plan of kuro was sucessful until now, and now there are 2 lovestruck girls, what kind of diabolical thing are you scheming author?

9yo

TFTC. in my eyes the house choice was good enough. she would never go to the slytherin of 1990s with the supremacy and misuse of dark arts, and she doesn't gather knowledge just for the sake of having It. While she could Go to Hufflepuff since she appears to value friendship and loyalty, her acquaintances did Go to Gryffindor, and she is brave because she did go against her family tradition of dark arts.

baby delivery

idk Boss... seems really like a Child