I love the story idea and the way of writing and how the author impersonate every character and show it is personality in the way of talking and taking actions and thair reactions to some things

I am in love with the story and the way of writing I love how you make every character personality appear in their reactions and way of talking and I see alot of potential for future events (example Orochimaru research meta) I wish you could write more and never stop because this is my favorite fanfic right now

Come on you can do it I see improvement in the writing and I super love the idea of the story and the personality of the MC is very good and I can't wait to see him take his revenge and have adventures in other worlds soon so please continue

I agree but there's are some low end stuff like memory steal gun Full body Energy shield Sentient ai Even nano machine wolverine claws Even butter robot (no use but funny)

Come on Rick Sanchez is a human put his knowledge in he is one if not the most versatile and op scientist in my opinion add rick and morty world to the system please and I love your story

جدع اديها كمانWell done hit her more (emotionally)

I don't believe there is a reliable power specially when it depends on luck

I love whare this is going like a self discovery journey that he needs and a small different side story style without changing the main one but still connected

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This is racist if you think about (JK) 😂

I know and feel you bro😭

If you don't intend to joke what does the gif you but mean?

I understand you are just joking but this is not funny I'm a muslim I see it as a very bad joke with due respect I wish you delete this comment or change it I will be thankful any way wish you good health and happy life

I like his motive but I hate him using manipulation and why dose he decide who to be a hero let just say for example that he want to make me a hero then with his his method he won my absolute hatred (I will do everything I can and spend every second I have just to make you feel pain and suffering emotionally and mentally and physically just for trying to manipulate my life or emotion) kind of hatred (note/I know I have problems)

Your name is missing a part_For_brains

Still he at least trying and putting effort I thank him for it

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Actually I find it good after all greed can cause the person to lose things instead of gaining and it's a good way to nerd him because kamui and spider sense are too op together

I like how you are hiding them

Thanks for the chapter and waiting for new one