AllenCross

Yeah, boring chapter... or rather, it's an exam arch.

Your secondary characters look much livelier than the main character, you made your main character does not attract, does not stand out, just another blank.

In the beginning it was interesting, but then everything became dull, the main character is boring, he lacks zest. His sister Maki, on the contrary, is better described and against the background of the story she stands out more than the protagonist. In short, the further you read the more boring it becomes.

So why do we need an unknown character when we have the original May

I hope that Madara will really be talked about by others, and not as the authors usually do, that after a grand battle, no one knows about the main character.

Artificial prolongation of the narrative. It's the worst thing an author can use. And what's the use of him showing off like that, as a result only a couple of people assume it's Madara, the rest of us are still clueless.

Thank you, Captain Hindsight.

How? Why doesn't anyone know? What about Kiri's Shenobi, what about Konoha's Shenobi when they saw his power? Come on author, introduce logic into your plot, don't lose it. The story isn't logical as it is, but to completely kill it, you need to be able to do it.

Rubbish, Bard didn't deserve that title. You just devalued the entire feat and title of the main character...

Didn't like the chapter at all, the most tasteless and dragged out chapter in the whole story. It's especially incomprehensible how the main character was late to Aubrey and Scout, while he went straight to them, but at the same time Leska was in time for Zula and Zula was in time for Aubrey and Scout..... Complete nonsense.