Stoicist
A stoic and someone who loves writing!
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At least in this part of the North.
Exactly!
Now, it’s corrected haha! I have missed on fixing this one! Thank you!
Thank you for pointing that out! I got basically no editor and its only me doing the proofread. Some repeated paragraphs go unnoticed in the writing process. Sorry about that and thank you for the comprehension!
Yooo! So, Luna has much more bargaining power than Henry. Imagine if you are the single one in a whole country capable of utilizing magic. It’s you who set the price for teaching anyone.
His eyes are grey, but it turns purple when his emotions flutuates.
Yeah, thinking back about it, it seems like I have made a hole in the plot. I am just re-reading it with more care and it seems like I will have to pull the strings and make for it. I will try revisit some chapters and revise it. Really thank you!
Oh, I didn't make it clear in this paragraph. He is using his teeth to hold and let go of the arrow.
So, Henry needs to have everything under control and he can't raise generals and leaders away from his watch. He wants to control the knowledge and the people.
Even in a nation-state there is a necessity for hierarchy. Stahl is going towards a society based and founded on the king's image, with the army only under the king's hands.
As you know, almost all leaders had gone through the teaching of Henry, who imbued them with a lot of ideas and knowledge. The engineers and builders didn't go through such training, it's still on the way. It's like in the ancient roman empire, where the generals gave orders and designs and the builders had to accomplish the mission.
And, to dominate another kingdom, there is a must to destroy their representatives and symbols. All kingdoms and even nations nowadays are formed by symbolisms, take France for example, it's all those symbolism that generates patriotism. If you torn out those symbols, you can easily dominate them, incorporating your own symbols into that society.
So, I am going with a structure that is closely resembling the Empires of Earth, where the nobility is extinguished and the power is centered around the king. It's a hierarchy that gives all decision to the army and to the king, who is the chief of the army. In a noble system, the nobles can easily revolt and take the lands, and Henry understand that.
Yes, they are still researching, but the seal hasn't not been broken, it's only weakened to a point of allowing a single Winter Orcs to get out of there. It might take a few years for the seal to be undone.
Heyyy, Zoka!! Thank you for the feedback, I know I am rushing things, but it will soon become clear. The attack of Aritreia and Luak was supposed to be way longer, but after some plotting, I came to the resolution that we might have a bigger hand manipulating everything. And Luna's ark is about to begin and a lot of things will be uncovered and the strings will soon be shown.