Yeah I can see where you’re coming from, but as a lot of people say, most of the impact is well received by the pads. The recent changes to the game have been protecting players from getting clocked like that most of the time, though it still happens you’ll usually only see players get the wind knocked out of them on most CLEAN hits. Whereas the illegal hits are REALLY self evident by the receiver taking a mid game nap.

Reason it isn’t full 5 stars is due to it still being relatively new, but it has AMAZING potential. The author doesn’t have grammatical issues, the pacing of the story is nicely done so far, is also showing good world building, and many others I’m not actively listing. Currently, the character interactions seem to be shaping up nicely with, of course, your stereotypical bullies at the start, but at some point it appears the characters will somewhat compromise as teammates. I don’t know what the author plans on as far as longevity or how far they’ll take it, either college or actual pros, but I’m here for it. If I’m leaving something like romance out, well I honestly don’t know if that’ll ever be included, depends on the author. No matter what though, I’m really looking forward to the story and need more chapters.

Well in todays game they get the most attention, protection, utilization, and are usually huge offensive weapons. Back in the day, running backs were the better positions to be in but they took A LOT of abuse during games. Not to mention on defense it’s crazy difficult to guard a receiver properly since they get so much attention it’s often impossible for defenses to do their job because of controversial penalties.

Welcome back! Really missed the chapters🙏

Trial

The entire chapter needs “trail” changed to “trial”

Congrats on 100! 🎉 🎊 🎉

Great chapter really liking the development of events and reveals please keep it up 🙏

Loving what you’re doing so far, the writing isn’t perfect but it’s still readable and doesn’t take away too much from the story. I am really looking forward to you introducing nuzlocke’s and peoples reactions to such a way to play the game. That being said please keep going 🙏

We will be here 🫡 Thanks for not dropping 🙏

Thanks for another great chapter 🙏

To be fair, the world record is nearly 2 hours 😂

Thanks for the chapter 🙏

Loving the story so far keep up the great work 🙏

Thank you for the chapter 🙏

No problem! Really like the concept and story so far but I’d really look into running your stuff through grammarly before posting. It may not be perfect but it does help a lot of times.

Story itself has a lot of promise, grammar as stated in the synopsis is a bit rough but doesn’t hurt the flow of the story a lot of times but Grammarly would really help. Pacing seems ok for the most part and the various reactions the author writes in help add to the development of how the world and people are reacting to whats occurring. Overall, it’s shaping up to be great if the grammar issues see some fixing then I easily see this being a consistently amazing story.

In case this isn’t evident by you having no likes on this comment, and 9 on the comment below, you’re dead wrong.

You going to implement Pokémon rangers as well? Seems like a great means of protecting Pokémon in One Piece

Welcome back! Thanks for not dropping 🙏