Claustrophobia leads to mini panic attacks, some can feel that level of claustrophobic in large crowds if they aren’t used to or don’t like being around that many people.

Thanks for another great chapter 🙏

You could just shorten it to their nicknames, like instead of his whole name and his nickname it could just be “Tank” when in a team setting

Thanks for another great chapter 🙏, I don’t know if you’re still planning on having him remake Stephen King books but if you do I feel like it would be a fresh way someone catches Wednesday’s attention in a fanfic

Welcome back thanks for the chapter 🙏

Nice chapter keep up the awesome work 👍

Yeah I can see where you’re coming from, but as a lot of people say, most of the impact is well received by the pads. The recent changes to the game have been protecting players from getting clocked like that most of the time, though it still happens you’ll usually only see players get the wind knocked out of them on most CLEAN hits. Whereas the illegal hits are REALLY self evident by the receiver taking a mid game nap.

Reason it isn’t full 5 stars is due to it still being relatively new, but it has AMAZING potential. The author doesn’t have grammatical issues, the pacing of the story is nicely done so far, is also showing good world building, and many others I’m not actively listing. Currently, the character interactions seem to be shaping up nicely with, of course, your stereotypical bullies at the start, but at some point it appears the characters will somewhat compromise as teammates. I don’t know what the author plans on as far as longevity or how far they’ll take it, either college or actual pros, but I’m here for it. If I’m leaving something like romance out, well I honestly don’t know if that’ll ever be included, depends on the author. No matter what though, I’m really looking forward to the story and need more chapters.

Well in todays game they get the most attention, protection, utilization, and are usually huge offensive weapons. Back in the day, running backs were the better positions to be in but they took A LOT of abuse during games. Not to mention on defense it’s crazy difficult to guard a receiver properly since they get so much attention it’s often impossible for defenses to do their job because of controversial penalties.

Welcome back! Really missed the chapters🙏

Trial

The entire chapter needs “trail” changed to “trial”

Congrats on 100! 🎉 🎊 🎉

Great chapter really liking the development of events and reveals please keep it up 🙏

Loving what you’re doing so far, the writing isn’t perfect but it’s still readable and doesn’t take away too much from the story. I am really looking forward to you introducing nuzlocke’s and peoples reactions to such a way to play the game. That being said please keep going 🙏

We will be here 🫡 Thanks for not dropping 🙏

Thanks for another great chapter 🙏

To be fair, the world record is nearly 2 hours 😂

Thanks for the chapter 🙏

Loving the story so far keep up the great work 🙏