You have a bloody sentient AI.. and you're thinking of going into fast food? Is the answer not obvious? Sentient AIs in fiction are all basically gods of cyber space...

Darklord is gonna body someone in the future. You just know its' gonna happen.

That is so foul 😭

A good opportunity for them to get some experience. Ace already seems able to compete with Yonkos, but his crew doesn't have the strength or experience to do the same. Paradise might as well serve as a training ground

???

Bro has got some freakish eyesight to be able to see, let alone so soon....

Proofreading would be cool, the amount of grammar issues lowers the quality of the story quite a bit. Whether it's common issues that break immersion, the readers flow, or more glaring ones where you can't even understand the sentence, just kinda having to assume what was meant.

So this system is pretty liberal with levels huh? 😕

i dunno, it's worded so that you don't really know if their existence was retroactively erased, or just neutrino bombed. One he never existed to begin with, and the other he ceased to exist across the multiverse all at once.

So is Mc like most Cosmic beings that, despite being powerful, it is only in their universe? With variants of themselves in every universe that's part of the Marvel Multiverse? Or is he just a singular entity whose authority/domain(?) spans all of the Marvel Multiverse?

Can't he just grant himself these abilities as Oblivion?

Meh, just treat it as 'The future is always in flux' kinda thing. Since he hasn't returned its working off the base that he never did, at least that's my assumption since Time Baby noticed anomalies and the change wasn't instant.

So... He's not gonna do anything regarding his physical appearance? Just gonna expect everyone to role with it? Maybe Mabel could undergo a similar boost? So she doesn't feel left behind ;c

It feels a bit fast paced, jumping from one thing to another with little downtime or fleshing out the in-between, no real development in character relations. He has more of a just 'been there done that kinda onto the next' attitude

Just imagining a multiversal adventure with Mabel just dragging Dipper everywhere without a second thought while stressing him tf out about the consequences of whatever mischief they find themselves in 😂

Not quite liking the angels taking such an active role in this. I get that they've already interfered a ton by preventing bad ends, however, them stopping time and talking to Hermione's parents just to stop her dad from getting upset is ridiculous. Alongside Daphne's angel who dropped by last time as well. It's like they're getting hand held all the way. If they can stop time like this, over something so trivial, then they may as well be a 'get out of jail free card' since they don't want Harry to die for a final time. It just makes their actions and whatever consequences that may be feel so distant and hollow. What does it matter that there's a big bad darklord that wants you dead when you've got time stopping angels for you and your wife that will see you succeed.

I think Mcs attitude fits well with the imagery of his deck.