Nana1960

Hello author, From MVS and the other book it can be seen that eternal life is pretty useless, boring. It also make the story less interesting as there is no death per say, there is no clock ticking to make an impact in the world.

Seriously? from the fact that a group killed him, unless he wants to go crazy from isolation, shouldn't he focus on forming a group? brainwashing people into serving his goals, killing for him and killing preemptively all his enemies? I feel like rebirth has made him dumber. Why not use the same weapon that killed you instead of being a loner again.

The story so far is good but the English is pretty bad. You are using "he" to design female characters wrongly. it gets very confusing. Maybe you should write in your native language and use google translate?

I think my English is pretty good, at least good enough to work in a an English speaking country. It is just that the way you write in English is weird. The sentences don't flow, neither does the logic etc. It is pretty hard to follow. It may just need an editor for smoother transitions.

Ok. My bad when I stopped reading there wasn't any other chapter but I see on the next one he met the healer. In the end I gave up on the story, the English is making it hard for me to understand what is going on. The story seems interesting but I get confused too much reading it. I stopped at the first arena battle when he asked the old lady to go get stuff for saving her grandson. Good luck author.

it is life couple break up. Even more so if you got with the person in your teens or twenties because your personality isn't formed and you don't know what you want. We all grow and sometimes the person we are with either doesn't grow with us or just changes too.

ahaha. And your name is villain...not much of a villain!

Very good book currently at chap 7. Not sure how the story will unfold. I noticed the characters were waiting for the military to help them lol....In a carribean country? That's unlikely unless they have someone who has connections among them. So far so good, I guess the main things that can make the novel go sideways are the future interactions with the new team members (Amelia's boyfriend seems already like a future headache), how they get off the island, they find their families in the US and also kennen will most likely have to go to china to find his family. I guess all these elements can be future arcs of the storyline. Honestly the level of writing is pretty good except for some typo here and there but nothing major!! Also, I love that the "system" isn't prominent as in other novel. At this point it may have even been better if there was no system as it is not really giving them any advantage and it would make the novel more realistic. The downsides is that they wouldn't know anything about their powers and the storylines would be longer to make them figure it out. Hopefully you don't become a system junkie author. Good luck. Please try to increase the frequency of updates.

So author, even though he will fall in love with 2 women, will he pick one? or are we having some kind of wish fulfillment where the 2 women are ok with sharing (cheating) their man ?

Love triangle isn't harem. Haven't you seen the vampire diaries, the battle of Troy? the story of the 3 kingdoms? as much as you may hate it. Love/feelings make the world go round not logic. We are not logical creatures. Just look at the Tudors and England with Anne Boolean.