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The timeline is not correct. the 3rd ninja war starts after sakumo 's death. correct me if I am wrong?
is it all about how he is different, mysterious? Neji knows it, kiba knows it, hiruzen knows it,Sasuke knows it. if even genin can point him out of what's stopping danzo. Maybe , probably 😐
it's get better
mc powers are weird .when it's convenient he can sense hiruzen 's gaze from telescopic jutsu and other times he can't even find kabuto who's watching him in the same room.
it's unreadable 🥹..........................
I want to say one thing.you got talent for this and I love it👍🫡
how about giving command to the subconscious mind while the body transfer jutsu or trauma like blood fire and water .you can also make mind subconsciously ignore someone or something like weapon ii hope it helps
is it me or having a bathroom for a hunter is excessive or having a bandage in the bathroom is even weird.Valyrion steel sword is overkill .