Its good though not my cup of tea for two reasons one when talking to Emilia about her thing that got stolen (I don't remember what it was) the writer is adamant on using stole instead of steal and while grammatically correct is not what the characters would say at all (read the story if you want context) and number two author said Emilia was going to be in harem so yeah In conclusion it's good (at least from the point I read too) not my cup of tea but if you like harems and don't have any moral qualms with taking one of two women of probably one of the most tortured anime protagonists then take this Fan-Fic for a ride

Did you just steal the plot of Worlds Apocalypse Online for a throwaway chapter?

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finally a good comment

and jail is just a room 😁

What do you mean by this?

it's pretty good and the theme is diffrent from alot of stories i like the way the story is developing and belive it is one of the really good novels on this site

nice

there were to many I's i myself usually have this problem with writing however it gets to sound a bit weird