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Did the original author not realize that Edward was not Whitebeard’s family name? His family name is Newgate.

So this is just canon plus one? Why am I reading this when I can just go watch the show and get the exact same content?

Not a single bit of that made any sense. The moment Elia died, Renly and Wight would have been captured and either shipped immediately north, or just plain killed. No betrothal would ever happen…like ever. Might as well have written that Wight jumped on his unicorn, sprinkled fairy dust over all the Martells, and won them over with the power of rainbows and friendship. It would have been more realistic than this chapter.

Meh, not a fan of the new direction. Hopefully he vaporizes the vampire the next chapter and returns to the orphanage. Also, if Magic, health, and stamina increase through practice, then his magic should increase with all the practicing he has done.

Or it could just be someone else summons the Dark Brotherhood for a different target, and then there we go. Quest begins.

Personally I think it would be better off without any perks, points, or systems. Just a half-dragon learning magic and each “perk” is just a sign of him getting better at it. He uses less magic because he is more skilled, his spells get better because he practices them. That sort of thing.

You should stop bringing up things like systems and mods. These stories are all so much better when they haven’t entered a video game, they have entered a real world that a video game was based on. No systems, no health points, no mods or other crap. Just a real world with real people.

Of course it is bots, the whole story was plagiarized in the first place. “Harry Potter and the Daft Morons” by synik over on Fanfiction.net.

Awesome updates, can’t wait for more!

Amazing as always.