Amikiry

Yes, I see, it's now at #34. Let's hope that it has an effect. This book deserves much more attention than it's getting now. By the way, after 3 days I finally understood what exactly made me so sad while I was reading it. Like I said, if you look at it from the MC's point of view, nothing too bad happens (Well, until the current arc of course), if you look at it from Daphne's point of view... It's like... personal hell? Ever since they basically lost their connection as twins due to the potion only having one portion and they slowly started drifting apart, things have been getting worse and worse for her. Unlike MC, she doesn't have the same control over her life, she doesn't have any mentor or heritage to develop, and her abilities with runes are much lower. Basically, all she can do is cram the regular curriculum and even there she is not the best. If you look closely, the only good thing that happened to her was that she cured her sister... oh wait, no, she almost killed her, and also wasted a potion that she really wanted MC to drink so she wouldn't be completely all alone in around 60 years... She's also kept in the dark about a huge amount of things, and can only guess when the other shoe will drop given all the bullshit going on around her sister (I mean, she literally died recently? Twice actually). Not to mention what's happening in the current arc. Besides, she's not some ancient fairy to deal with this sh*t, but an ordinary girl, who is also mentally around 12 if I understood correctly... Yeah, I'm sad again. Honestly, your book needs to be strictly dosed. Reading it in one go wasn't my best decision.

I don't know if anyone told you this, but your book doesn't seem to be in the female lead fanfic section. It's either marked as original or in the male section. Probably the main reason for such low popularity.

The book is in the female lead category

Honestly, any normal person would have a total breakdown at this point. Considering that it is impossible for her to determine what exactly Le Fay is trying to achieve, she is simultaneously threatened by 5 parties (Dumbledore, Voldemort, Odin, Le Fay and the elf). Her father is dead, her mother is in a coma, she and her friends will die in a year, and her sister is also cursed and apparently being tortured, her girlfriend is missing and she has no idea if she is even alive. In addition, she is also obliged to return Avalon.

Well, if it makes you feel better, the author clearly wasn't joking about being inspired by Fate and stuff. There's some very conceptual magic going on there. Although this story continues to make me depressed.

Dude seriously. Like nothing too bad is happening but this story is really depressing me. Like wtf

Since when is Hiruzen a woman?

You praise them too much, sometimes even twice for one action. A couple of times is fine but not in every sentence. This reads really badly, I'll continue only because I like Yuri. Be more concise. Also, the acclimation time for MC was too short, and it was worth adding her own perspective and some time alone. Also the dialogues don't seem very natural

No, in that case I think his confidence will last for the rest of his life.