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prettydimple

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I just wish my ideas do not go to waste. Please read my writing 🙏

2020-05-12 đã tham giaUnited Kingdom
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple9mth
    trả lời OakFlame

    The characters information and surrounding will be more clear as you read further chapters. I will try including include some character information either in the introduction or the new feature. Thx for your comment 😁

    Ch 1 The marriage alliance
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    The Princess’s Bittersweet Marriage to a Doting Commander
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple9mth
    trả lời eudine

    Thanks so much for your support🙏🏾

    Ch 1 The marriage alliance
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    The Princess’s Bittersweet Marriage to a Doting Commander
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple10mth
    trả lời PurpleLight

    In terms of characters, it is western but the culture that is the clothing, buildings and things like this are eastern. Hope that isn’t too confusing

    Ch 1 The marriage alliance
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    The Princess’s Bittersweet Marriage to a Doting Commander
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple10mth
    bình luận

    I am curious to know who was speaking I to her mind then if it wasn’t Xavier

    Ch 7 A Voice In Her Mind
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    Rebirth as The Vampire Lord's Wife
    Kỳ huyễn · PurpleLight
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple10mth
     công bố

    I really love how the author didn't drag the plot for too long as least in the first six chapters I have read. The story is quite interesting from the onset and there is little to no grammatical mistake. I haven’t seen much of the male lead yet but I quite like the character of the female lead. She is not the usual cold reincarnated fl who is out for revenge at once, there is also a nice side to her and it seems she is taking time to adapt to her new surrounding first. You should certainly give this a read, I am sure it will grab your interest instantly just like it did mine.

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    Rebirth as The Vampire Lord's Wife
    Kỳ huyễn · PurpleLight
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple10mth
    bình luận

    Love the imagery in this chapter 👍

    Ch 1 Betrayed!
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    Rebirth as The Vampire Lord's Wife
    Kỳ huyễn · PurpleLight
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple10mth
     công bố

    Hello everyone, it is the Author’s review. I have put a lot of effort into this work and I have confidence that this work is definitely an interesting and captivating one. There is no perfect or black and white character and the side characters do not exist as a shadow of the main characters but they have their own stories and purpose. There is political strife and struggles, action, romance, love webs and lots of plot twists to be expected. Please give it a chance and you won’t be disappointed. ❤️

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    The Princess’s Bittersweet Marriage to a Doting Commander
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple10mth
    bình luận

    Quotation marks should be in front of correction

    Correction: We kill the people who kidnap children, Miss Chae. We save the children from their kidnappers." His voice lowered as his mouth touched her ear. "There is such a difference."
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    Love and Daggers
    Thành thị · Aphrodite_Love
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple10mth
    bình luận

    Sorry to leave an unrelated comment but I would like to ask for the artist who did your cover?

    Ch 1 The Cursed Princess
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    The Crown's Seduction
    Kỳ huyễn · Eustoma_Reyna
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple10mth
    trả lời Fredrick_Udele

    Do you know people can tell it’s the author reviewing himself? Just curious

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    Whiskey Poison
    Kỳ huyễn · Fredrick_Udele
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple1yr
    bình luận

    If would be better if you don’ include foreign phrases as your readers can’t understand what they are reading

    "Tasie you remember when he was still crawling and how he played ball with Elo. Nna, rate umundia ji zi eto these days."
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    Deeper: Far from surface
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple1yr
    trả lời DaoistVPi6q1

    Thx for reading this book to the end. I will certainly return with a second part in 2023. Please wait for it and don’ forget to leave a review. 🥰

    Ch 377 The end
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    Romance Of Flame And Ice
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple1yr
    bình luận

    I am not talented as a author myself but I just want to give you an advise. You need to stop writing for now and learn to use dialogue tags and punctuations. You are writing the dialogue with the descriptions causing the paragraphs to be too long and jumbled to the point where it is hard to understand what you are writing. If you go too far before anyone gives you this advise or before stopping and taking the time to actually learn writing format, it will be hard to correct the mistake when you realise then later. I am just advising you as a fellow author who started with no idea of how to properly write so please do not take this the wrong way. 😁

    Ch 5 Chapter 5
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    Fated to kill you
    Kỳ huyễn · Angelswizard
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple1yr
    bình luận

    HIs character is of someone who wants to do something but is a coward. At times you can’t blame people like this 😫

    Đoạn này đã bị xóa
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    The Web of Knightspur
    Lịch sử · IrisSky
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple1yr
    bình luận

    I am impressed

    Ch 1 Back to the Kingdom
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    The Web of Knightspur
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple2yr
    trả lời Long_Star

    Thanks for your review. Han Chen is living an happy life with his daughter knowing that Yu Yan has a chance to live. This is not the end of the story as I am working on the season 2, I split the story into two cos I don’t want it to be too long. So watch out.

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    Romance Of Flame And Ice
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple2yr
    trả lời Alcelinia

    Your review you made my day that has just begun, it feels really good to know that someone spent so much time reading my novel to the end. Although I cannot promise that the part 2 will be happening early this year due to my final exams in June and the need to stockpile before publishing. I can assure you that I will do my best to publish it as soon as I can. Still please watch out fo my new work that will be getting published soon.

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    Romance Of Flame And Ice
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple2yr
    trả lời DaoistT7W2jn

    😂

    Don't wait for me at the altar today because I'm already on my way to meet the love of my life. It was fun fooling you around with Ken because he's not my distant cousin but the father of the child I'm carrying. You are too innocent for me, I need a wild and rough guy to handle me well especially his black huge c*** but...
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    His Curvy Obsession (BWWM)
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple2yr
    trả lời DaoistV7KLDi

    Thanks for this review, there is definitely going to a season 2 and you can expect it to be better than the first one which I wrote without experience. The season 2 will be happening definitely before May-June.🥰

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    Romance Of Flame And Ice
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  • prettydimple
    prettydimple2yr
    bình luận

    If you don't mind, please leave a review for this novel🙏

    Ch 377 The end
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    Romance Of Flame And Ice
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