Mr_Jak

Jake daring tehehe

This smells clearly like a trap to me, and MC seems like an idiot, two years and no one cleaned his body, no one fed him or made sure his body didn't atrophy muscularly, He just woke up, we won, the end. For a "superhuman" he seems pretty stupid or his perception is being manipulated.

Well... Being logical within what would be the generalized incubus, on the one hand MC would look for a harem, apart from the fact that his pheromones would affect women and on the other hand, MC would look for women whether to feed on energy or to increase their incubus powers, Also, remember that there are several women among the Piltover government And the noble families of Piltover and Zaun is disgusting in terms of hygiene and health, so MC can make some changes and gain power through those media

What the f***, What is that, a Lovecraftian Spawn?!

Ok frankly I love the chapter, question, will Glados torture MC and if she does it, will she do it with Snu Snu until he is dry as punishment for doing it in front of her? Glados with a cold, calculated but angry tone It seems that you love to spread your reproductive material so much, you disgusting hominid, let's see how much you like it, I've created a body for my use equipped with a suction device similar to that used in bobbins to extract milk, I am 99.9 percent sure that I will enjoy the results of this experiment. MC: I SWEAR I WAS JUST JOKING PLEASE NOOOO

Well, for me this story needs some tweaking in some parts, but it's more or less okay, About Alastor, he is actually easily beatable since it is his staff/microphone that gives him powers and Thanks to the S2 leaks we now know who gave it to him, Andrealphus on the other hand, outside of his ice powers you can easily smash his face in with blows.

I love the story although I'm confused by what happens in the end of this chapter.

Ok, honestly author, this story sounds good, but just reading up to the third chapter the protagonist and the characters seem like a bunch of mentally retarded people, MC says he's hiding when he's clearly not, he says he won't use his powers in public so he won't be noticed, Well, there are two big problems, he transformed into a fucking Optimus Prime in a toy store and then into Reed Richards to take an exam that is normally given in classrooms full of people, I don't even rewrite reality or erase the memories of people like Saiki Kusuo, Batman Lex and almost any guy with two brain cells would have had no trouble finding him if MC is so mentally retarded